Archive for the ‘Revolutionary ImproVerse Poetry’ Category

Discerning Darkness Response: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

August 2, 2017

She’s learned to discern/
the darkness. Now she needs to/
choose to run from it.

Nature’s Congratulations: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 27, 2017

Maybe the geese, the/
martins and the sunset, all/
combined, said congrats.
OR
Maybe the martins,/
geese and sunset all combined/
to wish me congrats.
Here’s the Geese Flight at Sunset video to go with it

I’m In Shock And Awe. Paddle Me Home, Bow Man: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 27, 2017

Canoe sunset, Lake Winneconne, July 2017A huge event in/
my life just happened and I/
have nothing to say.

A Better Airshow (With Sunset) : Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 24, 2017

Sorry, Oshkosh! This/
evening’s airshow at the lake/
was free (and better!)
(View the long video version here, including 1/2 and 1/4 speed video)

Free Sunset Airshow: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 24, 2017

This evening I took/
the chance to see birds’ awesome/
free sunset airshow.
Purple Martins sunset airshow, Lake Winneconne, Wisconsin July 2017
(View the short version here on YouTube)

Curse You, Facebook! Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 22, 2017

I’m addicted to/
share pics and words with folks who/
don’t care, and see theirs.

Firefly Fireworks Substitute: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 21, 2017

I was going to/
watch fireworks, then decided/
to watch fireflies dance.
OR
I was gonna watch/
fireworks fly, then decided/
to watch fireflies work.

Or Am I Just, At Last, Practical? Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 21, 2017

Have I become too/
old, at last, to want to go/
out dancing weekends?

Can’t Help But Yawp: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku

July 20, 2017

The red disc slowly/
slips beneath the horizon.
I can’t help but yawp.

Why Is This A Wisconsin Concert Thing? Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku

July 16, 2017

Men stand, beer in hand,/
looking, bored, stage-ward, while their/
women dance hot. Why?