Her slow response time/
made him wonder: Continue?/
Or let her slumber?
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Cyrano Writer: Musings of a Revolutionary Romantic Poet 
August 10, 2011 at 12:25 pm
When she’s resistant
best to retreat far away
so you seem distant
or really to extend the form a bit:
When she’s resistant
best to retreat far away
so you seem uninterested, mysterious and dangerously distant…. 😉
August 10, 2011 at 12:35 pm
Thanks for this — funny how everyone says the same thing … and yet it is SOOOO hard to do.
August 10, 2011 at 1:08 pm
Yes, very hard! Best when it happens not by choice but due to circumstances….