Slow Response Time: Romantic ConTEXTing Rhyming Haiku

Her slow response time/
made him wonder: Continue?/
Or let her slumber?

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3 Responses to “Slow Response Time: Romantic ConTEXTing Rhyming Haiku”

  1. zumpoems Says:

    When she’s resistant
    best to retreat far away
    so you seem distant

    or really to extend the form a bit:

    When she’s resistant
    best to retreat far away
    so you seem uninterested, mysterious and dangerously distant…. 😉

  2. cyranowriter Says:

    Thanks for this — funny how everyone says the same thing … and yet it is SOOOO hard to do.

  3. zumpoems Says:

    Yes, very hard! Best when it happens not by choice but due to circumstances….

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