Posts Tagged ‘opinion’

Can They Make Up Their Minds? Revolutionary IMprov Haiku

September 10, 2017

Folks told me I was/
scared. Now I’m brave, and they say/
I’m being stupid.

Join Me Dancing On The Dock With No Comment: Revolutionary ImproVerse Free Verse Poem

January 1, 2015

When I invite you
to listen to
the flash of brilliance
and the crash of thunder
from my words,
I do not ask
for edits,
or opinion,
or help.

I simply
invite you to join me,
standing on the dock,
watching the storm approach
and roll
and form.

I ask you to dance
on the wind with me,
no matter what
your movements may be,
no matter what
my jam may look like.

But please don’t tell me
to do a Demi pliƩ
when I want
to play air guitar.


Why Ask? Romantic ImproVerse Haiku Lament

October 22, 2014

Why ask what I want/
to do if you’re just going/
to do something else*?

to do what you want?

Discussion Pontification: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

October 6, 2014

Does middle age cause/
discussion to morph into/

Peaceful Majority Irrelevancy: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

July 20, 2014

In each holocaust*,/
the “peaceful majority”/
were irrelevant.

Any Answer Rhyme: Romantic ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku

August 25, 2013

In my opinion,/
any answer is always/
much better than none.

Truth Versus Opinion: Romantic Blogging Haiku

February 24, 2013

She’ll read my writing/
and think it’s about someone/
else, but it is not.

Getting My Girl Back: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku Lament

August 24, 2012

All have opinions/
on how to deal with my girl/
except for my girl.


All have opinions/
on how to win my daughter/
back except for her.