Crossing black asphalt/
in the heat of noon day: No/
wonder there’s warming.
Posts Tagged ‘heat’
More Heat In The Desert: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
April 21, 2014Marshmallow Head Retort: Revolutionary IMprov Poem
March 2, 2011A friend was professionally dissed by a friend of hers, who then asked if they could “try again”. She said the phrase in retort was something stronger than “Marshmallow Head”, but I liked THAT cut … so I IMprov’d what she could have said:
If I put your marshmallow head
in the heat of my creativity
and inspiration
and activity,
you will burst into flames
until you are a melting
g
o
b
of blackened,
charcoaled,
g
o
o.
And that will just make a mess.
Why the Desire for Sparks from a Fire? A Romantic Poem
November 17, 2009As I stoked a dying fire,
A warmth set to soon expire,
I added more fuel: dried wood.
Gave coals space to breathe, good.
And as I watched pine
Smoldering there,
Wood slowly warming,
Yearning for air,
It gave me pause;
Made me wonder why
Women look for passions’ cause
And ask for “sparks to fly”.
Sparks flying mean only
The flame’s been disturbed, goaded,
Kicked, poked, prodded, turned,
Or that super-heated sap exploded.
Instead shouldn’t they look for
The smoky, slowly-warming feat
That finally gasps air, and with a roar
Throws off constant, strong, radiant heat?
No sparks there
Kicked, thrust, thrown at random
Into the night air
With sudden, reckless abandon!
But rather glowing, red,
Steady, comforting heat.
Passions’ flame which, carefully fed,
Gives warmth that will repeat.
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