When I hear that folks/
have given up on her I/
ask: ” Lord, is it I?”
Posts Tagged ‘giving up’
Who Is Giving Up? : Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
July 21, 2013Wait For The Rebound: Romantic ImproVerse Haiku
November 26, 2012It’s strange how, just when/
your shot hits the giving up/
point, there’s a rebound.
Giving Her Control: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku
October 19, 2012She felt as though she/
had no control, so I gave/
it back. It’s now hers.
Or
it back. She must do.
Or
… so I quit
helping her escape.
Written after my daughter claimed she had no control in her life, then called me begging me to come get her from a treatment center she could leave on her own.
