It had been said so/
often it became classic,/
but hers was his first.
OR
Said so often, it/
was a classic line. Then she/
told him. He’s still shocked.
It had been said so/
often it became classic,/
but hers was his first.
OR
Said so often, it/
was a classic line. Then she/
told him. He’s still shocked.
When he who has a/
keen, artistic eye says I/
do, too, I’m flattered.
Will a haiku which /
flatters allow me to get/
to know you better?
OR
Will a haiku which /
flatters you let me fin’lly/
get to know you well?