The Message Gets Out: Revolutionary Blogging Haiku

Some criticized what/
I wrote. Was I wrong? One said/
it brought peace. Inspired.

We’ll Say Goodbye: Romantic ConTEXTing Haiku Lament

It’s easy to squash/
men’s enamoredization./
Just criticize them.

Who Asked? Romantic ImproVerse Haiku

When they tell me how/
I should or shouldn’t feel or/
be, I’ll lose interest.

What To Do In Church: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

I can sit in church/
and judge and criticize, or /
I can love and learn.
OR
I can learn to love.

We Don’t Criticize Falling: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

When we guide our kids/
as they learn to walk, we don’t/
criticize their falls.

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Critical Of Others: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

I criticize folks/
who are critical of those/
who are trying hard.

Critical Christian, Blaming Buddhist: Revolutionary Haiku

Christian and Buddhist/
argue and criticize. I/
float my own river.

Don’t Criticize Poetry: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku

I would never deign/
to criticize another’s/
poetic efforts.

Why Criticize? Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

People criticize/
others all the time. Why do we?/
So we feel better?

When Women Criticize Guys Romantic Efforts: A Revolutionary Blogging Poem

A friend’s Blog, EekHarmony, had a statement about romantic efforts by guys: “I humbly submit
http://www.todayandtomorrow.net/2010/04/13/love-injections/ for the pleasure of the many rapier wits on this site. Fabulously cool or frighteningly creepy?” My comment on the blog was:

If I, as
a rapier wit
was criticized
for writing or doing romance (or something like it) …
I’d quit.

Beyond fabulously cool.
Think of the synapses
which have to be connected
to make creative love passes.

So why deign to criticize
Any guy who at least tries?