The poet must learn to/
hear another’s thoughts without /
losing Muse whispers.
Posts Tagged ‘critical’
Don’t Back Down, Though Criticized: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku
May 24, 2016Tags:accept criticism, ConTEXTing Haiku, ConTEXTing Poem, ConTEXTing Poetry, critical, CyranoWriter, don't back down, don't feel bad, don't lose Muse, don't stop, Emotional poetry, haiku, hear other thoughts, it wasn't too much, Kuhns, muse, muse whisper, poems, poet David Kuhns, Poetry, revolutionary contexting Haiku, Revolutionary ConTEXTing Poetry, revolutionary poetry, so what if it was too much, text message poetry, text messages, too much, working through issues, www.cyranowriter.com
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Lift Where I Stand: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Iambic Poem
January 18, 2015If I’m to lift where I stand/
How often should I reprimand/
Others for their silliness?/
The government for causing duress?/
Our kids and friends for giving us stress?
Capitalists for raising prices?
Immoral folks who are spreading vices?
Big industry for pollution?
Bankers with no economic solution?
Do we rail as some try to do good?
Could their motives be misunderstood?
We often stand and criticize,
As we look with judging eyes.
What if we focused our critical gaze
Into our own internal maze?
Wouldn’t we see so much clearer
If we looked, first and only, into the mirror?
Would we be able to do more good
If we learned to lift where we stood?
We do not stick our heads in the sand/
When we help by lifting where we stand.
For isn’t it said: There is nothing greater
than loving God by serving our neighbor?
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Terrible Life Coach: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
March 7, 2014You have no clue who/
you are. How can I let you/
dictate who I am?
or
dictate my being?
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Learning And Growing: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku
January 12, 2014If I’ve learned a more/
Perfect way, how do I stop/
being critical?
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Some Kind Of Help: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku
October 18, 2013Once again, one who/
feels she’s helping manages/
to compound his pain.
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Who Asked? Romantic ImproVerse Haiku
October 18, 2013When they tell me how/
I should or shouldn’t feel or/
be, I’ll lose interest.
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Critical Of Others: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku
June 3, 2012I criticize folks/
who are critical of those/
who are trying hard.
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Critical In Goodness: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku
October 1, 2011Why do I become/
critical when working with/
good people who try?
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Criticizing Criticism: Revolutionary Improv Blogging Poetry
April 3, 2011I hate
that some
are so critical.
Criticism is dumb.
But is my criticism
and being critical
of them
being critical,
hypocritical?
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