Posts Tagged ‘comment’

She’s There More Frequently: Romantic IMprov Haiku

May 6, 2014

Like cool morning mists,/
she hovers over my mind,/
making me notice.

Or
Like cool morning mists,/
she hovers o’er my mind and/
makes me notice her

Too Tired To Comment: Romantic ImproVerse Haiku

December 27, 2012

She said she was too/
tired to talk or call me, too./
Should I be as well?

Comment On What You Gave Up For Lent: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

February 26, 2011

My funny comment/
on what you gave up for Lent/
was, alas, not sent.