Waving At A Flying V: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

Having a ragtop
lets you wave at the geese V,
hoping they don’t bomb.

OR
With my ragtop down,/
I wave at the geese V and/
hope they don’t bomb me.

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One Response to “Waving At A Flying V: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku”

  1. Inventing A New Poetry Form: ImproVerse Poetry « Cyrano Writer: Musings of a Revolutionary Romantic Poet Says:

    […] don’t bomb. (I did some additional editing and created an even better haiku; you can see both here at https://cyranowriter.wordpress.com/2012/09/02/waving-at-a-flying-v-revolutionary-improverse-h… Hopefully, using technology to think creatively and capture creative thoughts will encourage more […]

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